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Addendum Help

Addendum Help
« on: September 05, 2007, 07:39:45 PM »
Hi Everyone,

I need help with one of my addendums. Pure honesty always accepted and encouraged.

This topic was a very hard topic for me to write about. My advisers believes it is a must that I write about this topic. I need to know if this is too wordy, too whiny, too blunt, not telling enough, telling too much etc. I need all the help I can get when it comes to this specific addendum.

Please dissect as much as possible. I would appreciate any help you can offer.

Always,
California_RedRaider

Re: Addendum Help
« Reply #1 on: September 05, 2007, 08:11:52 PM »
PM it to me and I'd be happy to take a look  ;D

Re: Addendum Help
« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2007, 09:38:07 AM »
I'll be happy to read yours. Mine's long as well, so I have some experience with these.

Re: Addendum Help
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2007, 10:26:34 AM »
I'll read it - I had a similar situation, so I'll give you some insight on what I did, PM it to me

Re: Addendum Help
« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2007, 09:43:26 PM »
Glad to read it--PM it.

Re: Addendum Help
« Reply #5 on: September 18, 2007, 06:53:15 PM »
if you still need help, i'd love to read it. email me at saminabobina@yahoo.com

JGO

Re: Addendum Help
« Reply #6 on: September 20, 2007, 01:41:06 PM »
I'm working on an addendum myself.  Make sure it is not very long and grammar check!  Send it over if you need additional help...