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ghil04

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Need Opinions on My Latest PS
« on: August 27, 2007, 05:35:34 AM »
Hey guys,

My first PS received a fair amount of negative reviews so I decided to scrap the original idea and go with something else.  If possible, would any of you brilliant folks be willing to give it a quick read and provide me with some good feedback? 

I could really appreciate the help.  Thanks!

snewcrash

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Re: Need Opinions on My Latest PS
« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2007, 01:22:17 PM »
send it over

quincym

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Re: Need Opinions on My Latest PS
« Reply #2 on: August 28, 2007, 01:21:10 PM »
will read, pm me

meesawoosa

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Re: Need Opinions on My Latest PS
« Reply #3 on: August 28, 2007, 03:10:26 PM »
go ahead and pm.

ghil04

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Re: Need Opinions on My Latest PS
« Reply #4 on: September 04, 2007, 06:28:25 AM »
none of ya bastards ever responded....argh....

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Re: Need Opinions on My Latest PS
« Reply #5 on: September 04, 2007, 02:30:35 PM »
ill read it

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Re: Need Opinions on My Latest PS
« Reply #6 on: September 04, 2007, 03:31:31 PM »
I'll read it. Go ahead and PM me.

Tell me what you would like me to do.

On first drafts I usually just write about overall impression, themes, etc. Too me, the first draft is too rough to do hardcore critiques. But ifyouw ould like me to be more detailed and critique line by line/paragraph by paragraph please tell me.

I can be pretty mean sometimes, but know that I do it simply to help and not to be, well a *****. I personally like really good constructive criticism, but I realize not everyone else does.


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