You might want to revise the first sentence, it is a little confusing, especially the, "actions I took that led to these events." You may want to use some stronger wording in the last sentence. Say, "will not" instead of "should not," etc. Also, I know its pretty obvious from your previous sentence, but you may want to end with what character and fitness evaluation you are refering to. Just simply saying, "the character and fitness evaulation" seems a little ambigious to me.
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