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Rough, rough draft of PS, anybody wanna read it?

Rough, rough draft of PS, anybody wanna read it?
« on: July 30, 2007, 10:15:36 PM »
I'm debating between three topics:

- Father in prison
- Youth work on the southside of Chicago (2 summers)
- My love of basketball (tying it into Youth work, weight loss)

Here is something I bashed out about my father. Anybody want to read and critique it? Thanks!

Re: Rough, rough draft of PS, anybody wanna read it?
« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2007, 10:34:41 PM »
good that you finally wrote the 1st draft of your ps. i'll be glad to read it.

Re: Rough, rough draft of PS, anybody wanna read it?
« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2007, 11:37:14 PM »
congrats.  im still working on my rough rough draft.  would love to read if you'd like.

Re: Rough, rough draft of PS, anybody wanna read it?
« Reply #3 on: July 31, 2007, 08:28:16 AM »
i'd be happy to read it.

Re: Rough, rough draft of PS, anybody wanna read it?
« Reply #4 on: August 01, 2007, 11:47:20 PM »
Tweaked it some, and sent a link to all responders. Thanks for the help so far guys!

Re: Rough, rough draft of PS, anybody wanna read it?
« Reply #5 on: August 04, 2007, 03:14:52 PM »
It's slowly improving. Any other takers?

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Re: Rough, rough draft of PS, anybody wanna read it?
« Reply #6 on: August 04, 2007, 06:44:39 PM »
Send it my way :)

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« Reply #7 on: August 08, 2007, 01:06:47 PM »
Send it my way.

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Re: Rough, rough draft of PS, anybody wanna read it?
« Reply #8 on: August 15, 2007, 07:34:35 PM »
Same here.