read my LOCI? please?

[Sunshine Bound]

it's just a repetition of 'you're my first choice' and 'so please let me in' but I'm not so sure about the wordings.
anyone up for it?

[Last King of Edinburgh]

I'm bored, send it over.

[n/a]

Ship it!

[Sunshine Bound]

bumpy bump.

please, anyone...?!!
(none of the above two replied me back.oh well.)

[n/a]

It looks fine to me... it needs minor grammar adjustments... but I assume you are aware of that.  Content-wise its ready to roll

[Sunshine Bound]

sent over to the office.
thanks, splitter. I appreciate it.

[lovethelaw2010]

I'll read it over.  I've sent like 10 this cycle so I think I have it down.

[dayan]

There are a number of those threads already, so I wanted to avoid starting a new one...
Anyone mind reading my one page LOCI and one paragraph addendum?
Thanks a lot in advance!

[Sunshine Bound]

There are a number of those threads already, so I wanted to avoid starting a new one...
Anyone mind reading my one page LOCI and one paragraph addendum?
Thanks a lot in advance!

well, I will. send it over!

[Pugnacious]

I'll read it if you still need people.  I've written quite a few of these myself.