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Bruner

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« on: September 08, 2004, 07:43:22 AM »
I need someone to review my PS.  I finished the first rough draft last night, and have no idea how it sounds.(<-like *&^% most likely)
Someone please help.  Thanks!

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #1 on: September 08, 2004, 07:45:49 AM »

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #2 on: September 08, 2004, 07:55:36 AM »

Bruner

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« Reply #3 on: September 08, 2004, 08:20:07 AM »
Ok, i sent the PS to both of you.  Looking forward to botth of your suggestions. Thanks again!

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« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2004, 09:28:52 AM »

Bruner

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« Reply #5 on: September 08, 2004, 09:35:10 AM »
Cnadide

Sent it. Tell me what u think.  It is the 1st draft.  I appreciate the help! Thanks

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« Reply #6 on: September 08, 2004, 11:34:27 AM »

Bruner

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« Reply #7 on: September 08, 2004, 12:18:11 PM »
Drowles,

I sent it over.  Tell me what u think and Thanks!

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #8 on: September 08, 2004, 12:23:00 PM »

Bruner

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #9 on: September 09, 2004, 12:12:03 PM »
Anybody else want to rip on mine before I begin revising?