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Bruner

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PS Help
« on: September 08, 2004, 09:43:22 AM »
I need someone to review my PS.  I finished the first rough draft last night, and have no idea how it sounds.(<-like *&^% most likely)
Someone please help.  Thanks!
Weightlifting Commentator:  "This is Gregoriava from Bulgaria.  I saw her snatch this morning during her warm up and it was amazing." <---NBC

Tennis Commentator:  "One of the reasons Andy is playing so well is that, before the final round, his wife takes out his balls and kisses them."<--NBC

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #1 on: September 08, 2004, 09:45:49 AM »

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #2 on: September 08, 2004, 09:55:36 AM »
I can't pass up this oppurtunity to make myself absurd.
I can't pass up this oppurtunity to make myself be heard.
Nobody's gonna stand in my way.
Give it up son, I'm doin this my way.. Seether

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #3 on: September 08, 2004, 10:20:07 AM »
Ok, i sent the PS to both of you.  Looking forward to botth of your suggestions. Thanks again!
Weightlifting Commentator:  "This is Gregoriava from Bulgaria.  I saw her snatch this morning during her warm up and it was amazing." <---NBC

Tennis Commentator:  "One of the reasons Andy is playing so well is that, before the final round, his wife takes out his balls and kisses them."<--NBC

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2004, 11:28:52 AM »

Bruner

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #5 on: September 08, 2004, 11:35:10 AM »
Cnadide

Sent it. Tell me what u think.  It is the 1st draft.  I appreciate the help! Thanks
Weightlifting Commentator:  "This is Gregoriava from Bulgaria.  I saw her snatch this morning during her warm up and it was amazing." <---NBC

Tennis Commentator:  "One of the reasons Andy is playing so well is that, before the final round, his wife takes out his balls and kisses them."<--NBC

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #6 on: September 08, 2004, 01:34:27 PM »
ATTENDING... UGA.. GO DAWGS!!!
Accepted: UGA, GW PT, Tulane
Dinged:GMU PT/FT
Priority Waitlist: Gtown PT
Waitlist: BC, WUSTL, Emory
Applied: GMU PT/FT, GW PT, Gtown PT, Emory, UGA, BC, Tulane, WUSTL

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #7 on: September 08, 2004, 02:18:11 PM »
Drowles,

I sent it over.  Tell me what u think and Thanks!
Weightlifting Commentator:  "This is Gregoriava from Bulgaria.  I saw her snatch this morning during her warm up and it was amazing." <---NBC

Tennis Commentator:  "One of the reasons Andy is playing so well is that, before the final round, his wife takes out his balls and kisses them."<--NBC

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #8 on: September 08, 2004, 02:23:00 PM »
'why does it hurt so much when i poke it?'

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Re: PS Help
« Reply #9 on: September 09, 2004, 02:12:03 PM »
Anybody else want to rip on mine before I begin revising?
Weightlifting Commentator:  "This is Gregoriava from Bulgaria.  I saw her snatch this morning during her warm up and it was amazing." <---NBC

Tennis Commentator:  "One of the reasons Andy is playing so well is that, before the final round, his wife takes out his balls and kisses them."<--NBC