my personal statement topic..please tell me what you think

[futurelawyer859]

I wanted the focal point of my PS to be about a time in my life when I was 12 years old and I was brutally beaten and assaulted at school.
Basically I want to talk about how this experience impacted me as a person and my life.  When this happened to me it really changed my life forever and has specifically led to my desire to advocate victim's rights.
Is something like this acceptable?

[The ZAPINATOR]

Sure, it's acceptable, and even interesting if you can make it work.  Good luck with it.

ZAP