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midjeep

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PS Review Please
« on: September 06, 2004, 06:14:06 PM »
First off, thanks to all those who read and critiqued my PS last time. I have since revised it and would like feedback on the new version. No worries, its down from 1300 words to under 700 words, so its a quick read. Just want to see if it gets the same impact as before and seeing if it "flows." Thanks in advance. When you post your email, tell me if you prefer if I send it as an attachment (word document) or if I should just paste it in the body.
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Re: PS Review Please
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2004, 06:49:13 PM »
I will review it .. shadowcreeperz@hotmail.com ... attach it if you can.
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Re: PS Review Please
« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2004, 07:27:14 PM »
I would like to read it and check out my competition at GMU =).  You can email it in the body of the email to shanrocks73@hotmail.com.   By the way, I was an English major and enjoy reading and editing personal statements.

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Re: PS Review Please
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2004, 07:32:15 PM »
if you want one more, I am down.  mynameisasad@yahoo.com
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Re: PS Review Please
« Reply #4 on: September 07, 2004, 08:29:47 AM »
Could you please resend it to me at shanrocks73@hotmail.com.  For some reason, it went into my junk email folder and I accidentally deleted it.  Many thanks!

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Re: PS Review Please
« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2004, 10:27:41 AM »
Sent and re-sent. Tell me what ya think. Be brutally honest. Thanks!
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Re: PS Review Please
« Reply #6 on: September 09, 2004, 01:41:31 PM »
I will review as well:   email_davids@yahoo.com