I want to thank everyone who helped me narrow down a topic. I really appreciate it. My personal statement is in rough draft form, but it is long (4 pages 1,648 words). I was wondering if anyone would mind taking a few minutes to take a look at it and give me some feedback. I was thinking of using one of those editing services to help me cut it down a little bit, but I figured here was as good a place as any to start. If anyone has a few minutes, I would appreciate it.
Thanks in advance,