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My DS is a little under 1 page too. Is this too little? I wrote it originally for Columbia b/c it asks for a "brief" statement. Basically instead of having an intro paragraph I just had a thesis sentence "I would contribute diversity because...". Then I had a paragraph about my first diverseity trait followed by a paragraph about my second diversity trait and closed with a final sentence "I hope to add my perspective to your law school" type sentence. Is that too short? I'm worried that it might hurt me because I didn't have an introduction and conclusion paragraph. But on the other hand that would take away significantly from the briefness of the statement. Any thoughts? Anyone care to share how they formatted their DS?