2 PS topics- help?

[Reesespbcup]

I wrote my personal statement based on my experience advocating for my father (who had a really bad stroke). However, I work in the financial industry and what I really want to do is work for the SEC (Securities & Exch Comm). Because of my interest in the financial arena, I am applying to a few schools which are located in the DC area and/or have securities law programs. Also, my first ps is kinda short so I'm concerned that I don't adequately "make the case" that I am a good LS candidate.

So, I began writing a second personal statement based on my desire to be an atty in the financial industry but all I can seem to eek out is a few paragraphs. And the situation w my dad really had a profound impact on who I am...

Any body interested in reading my 1st PS and the 2 paragraphs I've got on my second one?
I'd certainly be willing to return the favor!!!!!

[go.ph.]

I can take a look at 'em

[Dohrraaba]

i'll read too

[Hank Rearden]

PM them over.