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critique rough addendum?

rena123

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critique rough addendum?
« on: July 06, 2006, 09:31:47 PM »
would anyone like to read a draft of my addendum?  i think it's probably longer than most because i took two semesters off for two completely different reasons.  i would love to know ways to make it shorter and also if you think the explanations are good.  just let me know if you're willing to read it and i'll pm it to you.  thanks! 
also, i'm happy to read anyone else's ps or addendum, so feel free to pm me yours if you want another reader.

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Re: critique rough addendum?
« Reply #1 on: July 06, 2006, 09:37:57 PM »
PM it over.

Re: critique rough addendum?
« Reply #2 on: July 06, 2006, 09:58:20 PM »
I like to think of myself as the queen of cutting (I usually overwrite so I have lots of experience making things shorter)...send it over.

Re: critique rough addendum?
« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2006, 12:20:09 AM »
I'll read it.

Re: critique rough addendum?
« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2006, 12:23:40 AM »
would anyone like to read a draft of my addendum?  i think it's probably longer than most because i took two semesters off for two completely different reasons.  i would love to know ways to make it shorter and also if you think the explanations are good.  just let me know if you're willing to read it and i'll pm it to you.  thanks! 
also, i'm happy to read anyone else's ps or addendum, so feel free to pm me yours if you want another reader.

oh, i thought you were writing the addendum to explain your poor LSAT. jk  ;D