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theli

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Looking for feedback on rough draft p.statement.
« on: August 14, 2004, 08:11:04 PM »
I'm in desperate need of feedback on my p.statement. Is it too cookie cutter like? To dry? Should I elaborate more? Etc. Anyone interested and have a bit time? (: Give me a shout and post your email please (:

Thanks!
P.S. I gave up on writing a complicated story and ended up sticking to the traditional route.

lazybum

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Re: Looking for feedback on rough draft p.statement.
« Reply #1 on: August 14, 2004, 08:16:55 PM »
edit

nonobvious

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Re: Looking for feedback on rough draft p.statement.
« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2004, 11:36:41 PM »
"Flying is simple. You just throw yourself at the ground and miss."

rachel

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Re: Looking for feedback on rough draft p.statement.
« Reply #3 on: August 14, 2004, 11:59:30 PM »
Sure I'll read it, rach495@yahoo.com

Matthew_24_24

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Re: Looking for feedback on rough draft p.statement.
« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2004, 12:20:39 AM »

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« Reply #5 on: August 15, 2004, 02:19:29 PM »

Matthew_24_24

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Re: Looking for feedback on rough draft p.statement.
« Reply #6 on: August 15, 2004, 03:10:17 PM »
Read and edited (and emailed back).

Matt

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Re: Looking for feedback on rough draft p.statement.
« Reply #7 on: August 15, 2004, 09:19:30 PM »

theli

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Re: Looking for feedback on rough draft p.statement.
« Reply #8 on: August 15, 2004, 10:02:19 PM »
A quick note,

For those who looked over my p.statement. Thank you very very very very much (: I'm working on my second draft now, thanks for the input!!!

Cheers,
Theli

Matthew_24_24

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Re: Looking for feedback on rough draft p.statement.
« Reply #9 on: August 16, 2004, 03:21:19 AM »
HBCU: Why would you help theli?  She is not black.  What happened to black power?

Lol

Matt