Iím going tomorrow morning early to drop this off at the FSU college of Law, any idea on improvement, or if this is good, would be appreciated.
Florida State College of Law Admissions,
Iím writing to express my total and complete commitment to attending Florida State University College of Law if admitted. I have several explicit reasons for continuing my educational experience at Florida State. First and foremost is my commitment to helping the people and communities of the great state of Florida. I have lived here my entire life, and wish to help provide legal services in my home state.
It is also my situation where I am going to have to finance my Legal education myself, so to be able to attend a state university will go a long way to enable me to gain this education. It is unfortunate that monetary issues are of primary concern in educational matters; however this is a reality that must be accepted.
I have a great love for Florida State University and all of its traditions, to be able to complete my entire education here, would be a dream for me. Tallahassee has truly grown on me, and I now consider it my home as much as Ft. Lauderdale.
Thank you again for taking these factors in consideration when reviewing my file.