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need to cut 200 words for brooklaw...HELP PLEASE!

need to cut 200 words for brooklaw...HELP PLEASE!
« on: January 12, 2006, 01:03:20 AM »
brooklaw only requires 5-700 words.  my ps is at about 920 words which is ok for fordham.  can anyone take a look and help cut out a paragraph or two? or if your not good at editing, care to try? i need anything haha.
i just spent 2 hours at barnes and nobles unsuccesfully trying to shorten my essay, any help at allw ould be great.
ty in advance

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Re: need to cut 200 words for brooklaw...HELP PLEASE!
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2006, 01:49:30 PM »
The cutable stuff in an essay is almost always in the intro and conclusion. The conclusion esp--we tend to go on and on, when it could be 2-3 sentences and be just as effective. Short-and-sweet is my mantra!

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