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pipskicks

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Anymore people looking to edit?
« on: January 06, 2006, 02:53:42 AM »
So I feel like my PS is about ready to get sent off (with the exception of an additional paragraph that may be in the works. 
Only thing that got me a little set-back is the fact that someone told me I wasn't direct enough, I still don't see it, and he wasn't very specific, he was a friend of a friend that was an UG adcom at Berkeley though, so I am a little worried.  If anyone is willing to give me an overall opinion, or to look for some major grammatical errors I'd really appreciate it.

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Re: Anymore people looking to edit?
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2006, 10:46:47 AM »
PM it to me, if you'd like.

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Re: Anymore people looking to edit?
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2006, 06:29:05 PM »
PM me or send to ecc212@gmail.com

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Re: Anymore people looking to edit?
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2006, 08:56:16 PM »
I'll take a look.


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Re: Anymore people looking to edit?
« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2006, 10:16:56 PM »
I just completed the first draft of mine, so I'm sure it'll need a lot of work, but if anyone is willing to read mine over, please let me know, too! Thanks!

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Re: Anymore people looking to edit?
« Reply #5 on: January 07, 2006, 10:18:15 PM »
Jenna, pm me and I will give you my e-mail. 

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Re: Anymore people looking to edit?
« Reply #6 on: January 07, 2006, 10:20:39 PM »
I just completed the first draft of mine, so I'm sure it'll need a lot of work, but if anyone is willing to read mine over, please let me know, too! Thanks!

you're welcome to pm it to me.
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Re: Anymore people looking to edit?
« Reply #7 on: January 07, 2006, 10:32:22 PM »
I just completed the first draft of mine, so I'm sure it'll need a lot of work, but if anyone is willing to read mine over, please let me know, too! Thanks!

you're welcome to pm it to me.

Thank you so much! I just sent you a PM with my personal statement.

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Re: Anymore people looking to edit?
« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2006, 05:52:29 PM »
i'll read both/either..send me a pm

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Re: Anymore people looking to edit?
« Reply #9 on: January 08, 2006, 06:10:58 PM »
I just sent ya'll PMs with my essay. Thanks!