Need PS proofreading.

[Nellbelle]

Please if anyone has time to proofread my PS soon, I would really appreciate it. I almost posted it right here as I need quick input as I have had writers block which put me behind but decided against it. It is in narrative style, and you can ignore the last paragraph as that is me just trying to fit in a paragraph as to why I want to go to school X. TIA.

[vitaminwater]

pm me.

or email

thebluebrownbear@yahoo.com

[Burhop]

you can send it my way, too. burhopd@yahoo.com, or PM

Dani

[Nellbelle]

Thanks for the responses.

Will send as soon as I get home from work.

Thanks

[nemo]

Sure I'll proofread it, PM me.

[Nellbelle]

For what it's worth, my pre-law advisor told me to never put the name of school in your PS.  She said you should only do that in a Why X school essay (Michigan/Penn).  It's your call, but if that's the paragraph you are most uneasy about, you should probably just skip it altogether.

Unfortuantely I will only be applying to T3 and T4 schools and they seem to explicitly want the reason why you would like to attend their school and even why law in a big majority of the personal statement instructions.

[Nellbelle]

PM's and emails were sent. Any other takers that have time tonight or tomorrow to help me out would be appreciated as well. I really need work with the flow of the narrative and slimming it down some.