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Would anyone read / critique my PS? Single mom, 30 yrs old, needs work...

I'd especially love feedback from non-trads who've successfully applied and been admitted. I'm a bit nervous my PS may be a tad too personal as it touches on some controversial topics. It's so tough to explain what I've been doing with my life, having neither met Nelson Mandela, rescued AIDS orphans nor started a company from scratch...

Re: Would anyone read / critique my PS? Single mom, 30 yrs old, needs work...
« Reply #1 on: December 27, 2005, 06:02:05 PM »
PM it to me. 

I'm not a successful non-trad, but I'm a good editor.

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Re: Would anyone read / critique my PS? Single mom, 30 yrs old, needs work...
« Reply #2 on: December 29, 2005, 08:40:41 AM »
I'll take a look at it.  I'm not sure if you'd say I'm successful, but I've got an acceptance, so I must have done something right.  And I'm not sure if I'm any good as an editor, but I'm a decent writer.  You just need eyes at this point and I've got those. 

Re: Would anyone read / critique my PS? Single mom, 30 yrs old, needs work...
« Reply #3 on: December 29, 2005, 08:48:18 AM »
You can PM it to me as well.  I have a journalism degree.

Re: Would anyone read / critique my PS? Single mom, 30 yrs old, needs work...
« Reply #4 on: December 29, 2005, 11:39:34 AM »
Me too. A 31 year old mom of a toddler, past work experience include law enformcent, legal and military. This is my second go around at law school (made honor roll before I left to join my husband overseas)

Got accepted and think I am a decent writer so another set of eye available if you want it

:)