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d_t

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Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« on: November 29, 2005, 05:53:30 AM »
I've finished a rough draft of my PS for Boalt. It's much too long at this point (4.5 pages instead of 3.5 or 4 tops) and I am not sure how happy I am with it, so I would really appreciate if someone were to 1) pick at it mercilessly, 2) cut out the extraneous fluff, and 3) offer some general comments. I would of course be glad to review your PS in return, if you'd like. Any takers?

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Re: Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2005, 08:22:09 AM »
I'll give it a look.

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Re: Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2005, 02:16:24 PM »
PM it over. I'll take a look.

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Re: Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« Reply #3 on: November 29, 2005, 06:14:39 PM »
I'll scratch your back if you scratch mine!  PM me.

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Re: Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« Reply #4 on: November 30, 2005, 12:06:20 AM »
pm me --I will give it a read

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Re: Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« Reply #5 on: November 30, 2005, 12:08:20 AM »
boalt 2L willing to take a peek.  pm it.
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Re: Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« Reply #6 on: November 30, 2005, 01:45:01 AM »
sure, happy to help. pm it over
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Re: Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« Reply #7 on: December 05, 2005, 06:11:50 AM »
PM it to me and I'll do my best to suggest edits for you

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Re: Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« Reply #8 on: December 05, 2005, 05:27:10 PM »
Thanks all.

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Re: Long PS (Boalt) - any takers?
« Reply #9 on: December 05, 2005, 08:39:00 PM »
If you still need help I'll look it over.