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Kevin83

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Read my PS....please.
« on: July 01, 2004, 02:42:43 PM »
If anyone would like to ready my PS, I could really use the advice. I wrote this about a week ago, and so far I've sent it to one wonderful girl on this board. I'm at a point right now where I'm trying to decide if my overall idea/theme is okay so that I can plow forward w/ making it better-suited for law school admissions. Any sort of crticisms/corrections are welcome--from adding commas, to just telling me which parts sound stupid or unappealing.

If you are decent with this sort of stuff, I could really use your opinions and criticisms before I waste any more time on it.

Email me if you're willing....thanks.

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Re: Read my PS....please.
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2004, 02:47:56 PM »
Beware, I did the same thing a couple weeks ago.

I emailed my PS to several people, and while a couple gave good comments (dsong, greeneqs, kristiGA, etc), some of the posters were more insulting than constructive.  People can be such dicks.

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Re: Read my PS....please.
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2004, 03:21:33 PM »
Beware, I did the same thing a couple weeks ago.

I emailed my PS to several people, and while a couple gave good comments (dsong, greeneqs, kristiGA, etc), some of the posters were more insulting than constructive.  People can be such dicks.

i havent sent you my comments yet.  i guess i shouldnt be a male private part on it now that i know. 
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