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Could someone critique my PS

Could someone critique my PS
« on: October 09, 2005, 11:37:42 AM »
I need all critiques from format to grammar to structure to the overall message of the statement. Anyone willing to help me? Thanks in advance.

jdw112

Re: Could someone critique my PS
« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2005, 11:39:14 AM »
I can be brutal. Send it over :)

Numbers

Re: Could someone critique my PS
« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2005, 11:24:17 AM »
I'll try and see what I can do.  PM me.

Re: Could someone critique my PS
« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2005, 04:16:51 PM »
ill take a look too.

twixlover

Re: Could someone critique my PS
« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2005, 04:55:12 PM »
i can take a look  :) PM me.

Re: Could someone critique my PS
« Reply #5 on: October 12, 2005, 02:29:08 PM »
PMs all sent.

Re: Could someone critique my PS
« Reply #6 on: October 15, 2005, 03:23:13 AM »
i'll give ya some feedback. pm or e-mail it to me:
hasansix@hotmail.com