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classicalsinger

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Hello all,

I could really use some helpful advice and friendly constructive feedback please.  I have written two personal statements.  There is one that I prefer which represents my latest efforts, but I think it could be better.  If I had to grade it, I think I would give it a B. I will gladly critique another personal statement if you provide your private email and your personal statement as an attachment.  Thanks for your time.

Note:   Since I originally posted this, I have noticed quite a few views, but no replies :'(so I have considerably modified this topic and removed my personal statement from the public.  If you are interested in assisting me, that would be greatly appreciated!  Please send me a PM with your statement, and I'll be happy to exchange mine for yours ok? :)  Many thanks!  8)

jarvisa240

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Re: Please review my personal statement--I could really use your input
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2012, 08:20:31 PM »
Hello!

Send your personal statement to jarvisa240@gmail.com
I will proofread it and reply back.

Send your email address so I can attach the final version.


classicalsinger

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Re: Please review my personal statement--I could really use your input
« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2012, 02:57:57 PM »
Will do.  Thanks so much for responding! :)