PLEASE help edit my statement, I want to apply today!

[NotLookingTooGood]

Hey all!

I really want to apply to school today... I can immediatly send you my statement and you can critque the hell out of it. I have all of my other materials ready. If you do this, I would love to help you out in some way!

Thanks!

[amassherst]

Where are you applying?  And are you looking for anyone to edit your statement or someone with specific credentials and experience? 

[NotLookingTooGood]

Hey! I applying to a variety of schools from UNC Chapel Hill, U of Florida, Florida State, Charleston, Campbell, William and Mary, American, Miami, etc... I have a 3.05 GPA and a 164 LSAT, so I don't know what is going to happen! : )

I am willing to take any advice on my statement. I even need help with comma placement! It's my downfall, lol.