That does read very cliche. Instead of speaking in gross generalities, why not expressly state how policies are generally more nuanced, complex, or in other words, grey? Be specific, and make sure your language is polished and precise. Cliche langauge can undermine your personal statement, and as a former admissions officer, I can personally attest to that.
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