This is for your law school personal statement?
Are you out of your f-ing mind?
The point is to try to seem like an awesome person, not a shithead buttnut who thinks s/he's better than everyone else despite objective evidence pointing in another direction (e.g., oh, I dunno, low GPA).
I would note that the last time you really succeeded academically was in high school. (Masterman?) A little humility is in order, habibi.
eta: nevermind. Found you on facebook. Masterman indeed. Also, we have friends in common, and are both Philly girls, so I say this with a not minimal amount of theoretical affection. Take it to heart and find a new f-ing topic posthaste. (Oh--make your email address hidden. Will serve you better in the long run.)