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Re: A request for Personal Statement critiquers
« Reply #10 on: October 06, 2009, 04:44:03 PM »
Thales,

I am familair with both American and Canadian law schools, and have helped clients gain admission to the top programs in both countries.  In fact, I recently attended an admissions workshop at Osgoode Hall in Toronto.  If you decide that you would like more professional insight of your Personal Statement, please email me directly at info@writetrackadmissions.com.  I would be glad to provide you with a free assessment.

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Re: A request for Personal Statement critiquers
« Reply #11 on: October 07, 2009, 03:08:16 PM »
Hey, Thales, I'd be happy to read and give feedback. I'm still working on mine, but I've been writing professionally since 1998, so I can at least catch your comma splices and give honest feedback.

Argh, personal statement. Argh.
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Re: A request for Personal Statement critiquers
« Reply #12 on: October 07, 2009, 10:16:25 PM »
Sure. Thanks for the offer guys.

I haven't forgotten. I'm still working on it. Unfortunately, I'm also a horrible procrastinator.

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Re: A request for Personal Statement critiquers
« Reply #13 on: October 08, 2009, 03:18:37 PM »
I actually drafted mine yesterday and I'm pretty sure it's tragically misguided, so at least procrastination is saving you from that fate.

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Re: A request for Personal Statement critiquers
« Reply #14 on: October 10, 2009, 03:16:58 PM »
Alright, I've sent off my PS to a few of you guys thus far.

For the others, I'll need your email address. The statement is rather long (and in .doc format) and likely won't fit in a LSD PM.

Thanks again everyone.