A request for Personal Statement critiquers

[writetrackad]

Thales,

I am familair with both American and Canadian law schools, and have helped clients gain admission to the top programs in both countries.  In fact, I recently attended an admissions workshop at Osgoode Hall in Toronto.  If you decide that you would like more professional insight of your Personal Statement, please email me directly at info@writetrackadmissions.com.  I would be glad to provide you with a free assessment.

Best,

Kal, Write Track Admissions

[vesperholly]

Hey, Thales, I'd be happy to read and give feedback. I'm still working on mine, but I've been writing professionally since 1998, so I can at least catch your comma splices and give honest feedback.

Argh, personal statement. Argh.

[!закон и право!]

Sure. Thanks for the offer guys.

I haven't forgotten. I'm still working on it. Unfortunately, I'm also a horrible procrastinator.

[vesperholly]

I actually drafted mine yesterday and I'm pretty sure it's tragically misguided, so at least procrastination is saving you from that fate.

/badly tarnished silver lining

[!закон и право!]

Alright, I've sent off my PS to a few of you guys thus far.

For the others, I'll need your email address. The statement is rather long (and in .doc format) and likely won't fit in a LSD PM.

Thanks again everyone.