"Adrenaline surged through my body. It was 0530 hours; I sat in the passenger’s seat of the unmarked Dodge; Driving was the office’s second-in-charge."Note the dual semicolons. I think it's fine.
If this is the only error on my PS, will this hurt me? I applied to several law schools already. I had it proofread, too... damn it.
The only issue is the double semicolons.
Quote from: xynder on October 25, 2008, 11:11:42 PMThe only issue is the double semicolons.This is not really an error; it's more a matter of style.