"Adrenaline surged through my body. It was 0530 hours; I sat in the passenger’s seat of the unmarked Dodge; Driving was the office’s second-in-charge."Note the dual semicolons. I think it's fine.
That's cool how you referenced a case.
I'm so far from the end of my tether right now that I reckon I could knit myself some socks with the slack.
If this is the only error on my PS, will this hurt me? I applied to several law schools already. I had it proofread, too... damn it.
The only issue is the double semicolons.
Quote from: xynder on October 26, 2008, 01:11:42 AMThe only issue is the double semicolons.This is not really an error; it's more a matter of style.
Saw dashrashi's LSN site. Since she seems to use profanity, one could say that HYP does not necessarily mean class or refinement.