help to choose a version, will review your statement

[lunagirl]

I wrote two slightly different versions of my personal statement (on the same topic though). Now I have hard time to decide which one is suited better for law school admission. Can someone give me some please take a look and give me some advice?
I also will give the feedback on your statement!

[nynole]

I can review your PS. Your email is hidden, so email me w/ yours and I will reply w/ mine.
-walt

[pmaiers]

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