Sooo,
I have been reading these boards for awhile. I just recently sat for the LSAT and am now impatiently waiting to see how terrible I did

Anyway, in the mean time I'm taking another look at my personal statement (which reads like a diversity statement). I have been writing it for several months. I submitted it to For People Of Color who does free reviews of minority applicants admission materials. They made some pretty good suggestions but overall said that I had a great statement. I think I may have edited the essay to their liking but unfortunately I can't resubmit (one time deal). I know you guys are mostly Harvard, Yale, and other T-14 students who will probably rip it to shreds, but if any current minority students are willing to give it a once (or twice) over, I'd greatly appreciate it.