Topic: Please critique my first draft (Read 837 times)

jas142 · « **on:** September 07, 2008, 12:19:17 AM »

Just completed the first draft of my PS. I need honest criticism. I will trade if you like

blueskies6 · « **Reply #1 on:** September 07, 2008, 10:46:53 AM »

I'd be happy to trade

randyers09 · « **Reply #2 on:** September 07, 2008, 01:24:24 PM »

ill critique it for you

jas142 · « **Reply #3 on:** September 08, 2008, 07:38:09 PM »

Thanks for the reviews guys. I have updated it and the second draft is complete (and substantially different than the first, hah). Any takers?

blueskies6 · « **Reply #4 on:** September 08, 2008, 08:18:29 PM »

Sure- I think I've worked on mine too since you last saw it so we can trade

sooz104 · « **Reply #5 on:** September 09, 2008, 02:24:59 AM »

I'd like to take a look toO! =]

studymaster · « **Reply #6 on:** September 10, 2008, 01:31:25 AM »

If youre still interested PM me and I will trade ya

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