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jas142

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Please critique my first draft
« on: September 07, 2008, 12:19:17 AM »
Just completed the first draft of my PS. I need honest criticism. I will trade if you like :)

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Re: Please critique my first draft
« Reply #1 on: September 07, 2008, 10:46:53 AM »
I'd be happy to trade
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Re: Please critique my first draft
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2008, 01:24:24 PM »
ill critique it for you :)

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Re: Please critique my first draft
« Reply #3 on: September 08, 2008, 07:38:09 PM »
Thanks for the reviews guys. I have updated it and the second draft is complete (and substantially different than the first, hah). Any takers? :)

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Re: Please critique my first draft
« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2008, 08:18:29 PM »
Sure- I think I've worked on mine too since you last saw it so we can trade :D
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Re: Please critique my first draft
« Reply #5 on: September 09, 2008, 02:24:59 AM »
I'd like to take a look toO! =]

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Re: Please critique my first draft
« Reply #6 on: September 10, 2008, 01:31:25 AM »
If youre still interested PM me and I will trade ya
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