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rider06

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provide e-mail addy and ill send

also let me know if the humor or anything else works/doesnt work

melisssasue

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Re: Rip apart my first draft...make me feel like an incompetent fool
« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2005, 01:58:31 PM »
I'll read it.  melisssasue@hotmail.com

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Re: Rip apart my first draft...make me feel like an incompetent fool
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2005, 02:00:05 PM »
Send it to me over PM and I'll have a look right now.
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Re: Rip apart my first draft...make me feel like an incompetent fool
« Reply #3 on: August 17, 2005, 04:16:02 PM »
I'd be happy to take a look: cedowdy@ucdavis-alumni.com

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Re: Rip apart my first draft...make me feel like an incompetent fool
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2005, 10:24:17 AM »
pm me

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Re: Rip apart my first draft...make me feel like an incompetent fool
« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2005, 10:33:58 AM »
PM me
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