Ok, you've just confirmed that I need to go to a school where all the men are trolls. Boys... studying... a deadly combination.
Seriously, I checked out your LSN profile and I really admire the fact that you are applying to a lot of reach schools. I am of the belief that good things happen when you set your sights high.
I actually took a similar approach as you did in writing my PS. It focuses on how one aspect of my sexuality (the process of coming out) has affected me professionally and personally, but it's not just "I'm gay. Blah blah blah..."
Good luck with your apps!