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wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?

wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« on: July 01, 2005, 02:53:20 PM »
How this opening paragrpah ends up will have a pretty big influence on the course I take with the rest, so I want to sort of have it settled before I put in a lot of time honing the rest.

ormachea

Re: wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2005, 03:55:58 PM »
I'll do it, pm it to me.

As an aside, what ad is that picture from? I think I recognize it from somewhere.

Re: wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2005, 04:36:22 PM »
I'll do it, pm it to me.

As an aside, what ad is that picture from? I think I recognize it from somewhere.

PMd

Re: wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« Reply #3 on: July 01, 2005, 04:47:44 PM »
i wouldnt mind readin it, PM it!

ormachea

Re: wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« Reply #4 on: July 01, 2005, 05:04:18 PM »
Feel free to ask me for any clarifications

hizzle

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Re: wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2005, 06:16:08 PM »
I would also be interested, Nascjacket.  PM me if you're interested in anthoer set of eyes.  (that sounds funny??!!)

Regards,

Hizzle

Re: wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« Reply #6 on: July 03, 2005, 05:20:34 PM »
pm it to me if you want even another look

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Re: wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« Reply #7 on: July 03, 2005, 05:36:12 PM »
ditto

allyreese

Re: wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« Reply #8 on: July 05, 2005, 10:46:58 AM »
i'd like to see it - allyreese@gmail.com

Re: wanna proof my first draft of my opening paragraph?
« Reply #9 on: July 05, 2005, 12:20:37 PM »
i'll give you my comments: goingtolawschool@gmail.com