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1st draft pls read. clever, cofusing, or crappy?

1st draft pls read. clever, cofusing, or crappy?
« on: July 01, 2005, 10:17:12 AM »
I just wrote a first draft had one oppinion so far and would love some more.  It is time to decide if it hunts, or if I should scrap and start fresh.  please leave your contact info and I will send it to you. Thank you.

allyreese

Re: 1st draft pls read. clever, cofusing, or crappy?
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2005, 10:56:09 AM »
I'll read it  :) - allyreese@gmail.com

Re: 1st draft pls read. clever, cofusing, or crappy?
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2005, 04:51:46 PM »
ill read it...pm it

ormachea

Re: 1st draft pls read. clever, cofusing, or crappy?
« Reply #3 on: July 01, 2005, 04:53:33 PM »
I'll read it, PM it--I'm pretty harsh, though...

Re: 1st draft pls read. clever, cofusing, or crappy?
« Reply #4 on: July 01, 2005, 09:31:53 PM »
If you still need takers, I would be happy to read, I am pretty good at catching those minor grammar faults that MS word doesn't catch.

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Re: 1st draft pls read. clever, cofusing, or crappy?
« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2005, 06:00:40 PM »
If you still need takers, I would be happy to read, I am pretty good at catching those minor grammar faults that MS word doesn't catch.

I was born to edit.  PM me.

ktcarlin

Re: 1st draft pls read. clever, cofusing, or crappy?
« Reply #6 on: July 05, 2005, 06:40:21 AM »
send it to me, I will read and critique.  ktcarlin@gmail.com

forbzik

Re: 1st draft pls read. clever, cofusing, or crappy?
« Reply #7 on: July 06, 2005, 04:07:17 PM »
If you still want help, I can look over it.  PM me.