I hope they cut you some slack, but I can see them looking at your statement and saying:
A) Does not follow directions.
B) Has trouble getting to the point. (single spaced, there's no need for a PS to be exceed 2 pages, some schools limit it to 2 pages double spaced.)
I feel for you though, I spent a lot of time fretting over whether I made some small mistake, or missed a minor instruction somewhere. It's tough keeping all of the different versions straight when you're submitting to a bunch of schools.
At least you didn't say "I have always dreamed of going to [insert name of rival law school]." (apparently that happens a lot)