HELP! Thank you note...

[annchris]

So how about changing the first two sentences to:

Although UF was already my first choice for law school, meeting with your impressive Student Recruitment Team representative for a tour last Tuesday has reinforced my decision.  The tour guide was only a first year law student but he managed to answer all of my seemingly endless questions with ease.

 :)Ok...edited above...

[annchris]

Thanks so much