Would you guys make any changes to this email- or send as-is?? Any comments would be appreciated! I want this to be perfect - UF is my first choice!
Dear Mr. Patrick:
Although UF was already my first choice for law school, meeting with your impressive Student Recruitment Team representative for a tour last Tuesday has reinforced my decision. The tour guide, though only a first year law student, managed to answer all of my seemingly endless questions with ease. I especially appreciate the way in which he approached our meeting - by finding out what types of law I was interested in practicing and revealing the programs and course offerings available to students at UF with my similar goals. He even went out of his way at the conclusion of the tour to make sure I left with some recent literature relating to your Family Law program.
Being a non-traditional student, I was also somewhat apprehensive about possibly attending UF. However, my tour guide addressed these personal concerns, and even assured me that his section contained a significant number of women with children and/or previous careers. He helped to make your law school seem even more friendly and inviting to me and for that I am truly thankful.
Please extend my kindest regards to your SRT representative and admissions staff.
[would it be a good/bad thing to add in here somewhere that UF is my 1st choice? I am applying for spring so I know they haven't even looked at my app yet. Should I save that just in case I get waitlisted or go ahead and tell them now?]
Thanks in advance guys n gals!