An Untraditional Stab at the PS- Any readers for me?

[Jgunnz]

I was hoping someone might have some time today (or any other day) to read my personal statement and give me some feedback. I'd be happy to return the favor for anyone who takes on this endeavor.

I decided to take a somewhat different approach from what I've seen before and write about one specific experience i've had and generalize from there as to how it helped shape my views on the law.

My goals in this essay were to get the reader engaged and keep them interested, produce a piece of quality writing, and explain one of the paramount reasons i'd like to go to law school.

My AIM name is z1jg, I can transfer you the statement via direct connect if you'd like to read it.
Or if you'd prefer you can e-mail me at jjg35@cornell.edu or simply post here and I'll get in touch with you.

Thanks in advance for any help. 

[Lulu]

I'll read it. I'm stuck working this afternoon and really bored. I'm emailing you, if you can email it to me, I'll have it back to you by tonight.

[John_Wayne_1002]

I will be very happy to:
john_wayne_1002@yahoo.com

[ScurvyWench]

I'll read it. I've been a writer/editor for the past 3 years, so I'd be happy to help. idsuperegotrixie@yahoo.com

[ElizaB]

I'll read it, too.  My email is Eli_6@hotmail.com. 

[lawmaybe]

I'll read it house4sale@usa.com

[lsatsrockfosheez]

rubytuesday88@msn.com