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PS review
« on: October 14, 2004, 08:27:18 AM »
Like everyone else, I am looking for some extra eyes to read over my PS. I have had 6 or 7 edits from people here, but they know me so it is hard for them to say what an adcomm would think based on the text. I am also concerned about one paragraph in particular that 2 people suggested I move to two different spots, but I think it breaks the flow.

Let me know if you are willing to help. It is short, I promise!

And of course, I'd be happy to look at yours in return.

Thanks a million.
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Re: PS review
« Reply #1 on: October 14, 2004, 09:07:40 AM »
I will be happy to look it over for you.

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Re: PS review
« Reply #2 on: October 14, 2004, 09:51:10 AM »

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Re: PS review
« Reply #3 on: October 14, 2004, 12:40:07 PM »
Sarendipity,

Sent back to you.  Well written, very well written!

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Re: PS review
« Reply #4 on: October 14, 2004, 12:55:39 PM »
i'll take a look. jamit999@yahoo.com

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Re: PS review
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Re: PS review
« Reply #6 on: October 14, 2004, 04:37:52 PM »
Thank you defense! You certainly helped improve it. And thanks to everyone - so generous to help
"Remember what I said about finding a meaningful life . . . Devote yourself to loving others, devote yourself to your community around you, and devote yourself to creating something that gives you purpose and meaning . . . You notice there's nothing in there about a salary."   ~ Morrie Schwartz