Like everyone else, I am looking for some extra eyes to read over my PS. I have had 6 or 7 edits from people here, but they know me so it is hard for them to say what an adcomm would think based on the text. I am also concerned about one paragraph in particular that 2 people suggested I move to two different spots, but I think it breaks the flow.
Let me know if you are willing to help. It is short, I promise!
And of course, I'd be happy to look at yours in return.
Thanks a million.