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BoRNnTHeUSA

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Add a Verse..
« on: January 27, 2008, 07:50:54 PM »
I need a life  :-*, but in the mean time I started a poem and need some help.  I'll start the first verse (or is it a stanza), oh well, and ask that each reply builds upon the previous.

So here goes:

I have a goal
that torments my soul
and robs me of my nights.

"I believe that what self-centered men have torn down, other-centered men can build up." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

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Re: Add a Verse..
« Reply #1 on: January 29, 2008, 12:39:23 AM »
relentless tries
to correct the lies
that have stripped me of my rights


btw...I believe we're both nerds for doing this, nevertheless, I like writing poetry. :)