Add a Verse..

[BoRNnTHeUSA]

I need a life  , but in the mean time I started a poem and need some help.  I'll start the first verse (or is it a stanza), oh well, and ask that each reply builds upon the previous.

So here goes:

I have a goal
that torments my soul
and robs me of my nights.

[vandyqt08]

relentless tries
to correct the lies
that have stripped me of my rights


btw...I believe we're both nerds for doing this, nevertheless, I like writing poetry.