The deal here is that I sorta do all my things in gradual order.
Perhaps I should talk about my volunteering at the Indian Reservation and how it gave me the since of achievement and drive to succed and how I will use that achievement and drive to do well in law school...perhaps I should talk about how helping the children with MS was a relevation of personal worth to me.
Now we're getting somewhere. I should charge for my services. Anyway, the key here is to tell a story of one event. That way, the adcomms aren't reading an "essay," they're reading a story. Talk about one experience at the reservation that was especially motivational. Or talk about one meeting you had w/ a kid w/ MS. Just start putting words on the paper. Then cut out the crap. Then post it up here when you're down to 400.