Well I don't know if dividing the conclusion in half really matters, but yes you can by saying that more tv coverage=more violent crime is the first conclusion and the not leaving your home part is the second but I think you are overanalyzing
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When I accepted the position I truly had no idea what demands, time requirements, and difficulties would lie ahead of me.
The advisor at my school told me that I should not apply to any school unless they are in the 4th tier because of my "low LSAT score combined with a not so great GPA". She also said I would be throwing away my $ if I applied to any school in the top 100. Well, so much shw knows- I've been accepted to a tier 1 and a tier 2 school.
Starresky, thanks for the encouragement. i'm prepared today to even take the exam...it was never about me being unprepared i was just really messed up that day and have included an addendum stating that. i'm pretty sure i'll do extremely well in february.