I've been trying to rework my PS essay for the last three months and the admissions councilor guy I hired doesn't seem to be much help. All he's willing to do is correct comma splices etc. Nothing substantial has come out of it. I would be incredibly grateful if you guys would be willing to read my stuff.
I will, of course be perfectly willing to return the favor. I'm really on a time crunch and I don't know what else to do.