why would you let a bunch of strangers on the internet read and critique your personal statement? a). for all you know these people are a bunch of idiots who are going to give very poor advice b). for all you know these people are just reading a bunch of statements in order to assess the "competition" and write theirs accordingly.
if any of these attorneys have first-hand experience working with you and can speak to your personal qualities in a valuable way, ask one of them. just one. and find a prof. since you have only been out of school one year, that is very important.