I am attempting to write my personal statement. I am looking for any and all feedback. Please do not hold back your honest opinion. I am unfortunately applying for the second time. I believe my rejections were mainly attributed to my low lsat scores (took them twice and cannot/will not do it again). I am reluctant to give up entirely on my essay topic because I am clinging to the belief that there is something still there. Perhaps, maybe it just needs some more work and critical advice. This version (I will email upon request) is a compilation of three different versions of the topic.
Thanks so much!