« on: October 18, 2007, 07:06:49 PM »
I have rough drafts of two possible Yale 250s, and really need some feedback about which (if either) to use. Since my full personal statement is very personal, I'm using them to demonstrate analytical thinking instead of telling them more about me. But it's such an awkward length for an argument! I'd really appreciate any help -- comment and I'll PM to you.