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Personal Statement / Re: Please critique my first draft!?
« on: October 29, 2009, 03:02:02 AM »
Hey Lekowitz.  I like it but it doesn't really make you stand out.  I think most people attending law school, me anyway, have a thrist for knowledge.  Also, by saying attending law school will satisfy your passion, it sounds like that could be the end (just sounds like and i am pretty sure that is not what you mean), but we know knowledge is ongoing an aquired throughout life. 
The intro is really catchy and I think that will set you apart.  I think you should focus on something unique within your family or those circumstances that sets you apart from most other applicants.  this will be a big advantage for you becasue I don't think most people have experienced these things.....especially young people, that grew up in America applying to law school with those numbers you posted in the other thread
Also, I wouldn't bring up anything negative with regards to school (dropping out) in the statement unless it drastically changed something in your life.  I honestly think that there must be something to write about that is more in line with the first paragraph and that experience that will be more "life altering" and set you apart much better.  Or use the statement your mother said to you and show how that changed your attitude and wanted to prove something to yourself and family......just some ideas off the top of my head.

That is just my 2 cents and I hope it helps......not trying to hurt any feelings...... but if you wouldnt mind reading my statement and "butcher" it for me I would appreciate it.  I have gone through about 20 drafts or so and you can see from the origional one I posted to now how it has really changed content and context.  It is under my thread name....mlacroix.


Thanks for the advice. I was thinking the same thing; it just sounds so boring after the intro. I'll take a look at your PS and hope I can give you some good advice. BTW I had read it before and commented on your opening paragraph; your story is really inspiring, thanks for sharing.

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Personal Statement / Re: Please help me with choosing a topic.
« on: October 28, 2009, 12:22:30 PM »
It's hard to say, it sounds like you could write a good PS with either one. I would suggest picking the one that will give you a lot of concrete examples of lessons, skills, etc. that you have learned and will make you a successful law student/lawyer; write about something that can't be captured in your resume/transcript. Hope that helps a lil.

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Personal Statement / Re: 3.84 / 161 & 173 LSAT
« on: October 28, 2009, 11:31:31 AM »
I would say it depends on what other topics you have for your PS. You have good numbers, so I would explain the score discrepancy in an addendum, and focus your PS on a story that can't be captured in your resume/transcript. If you really don't have anything like that for your PS, then maybe focusing it on that may be the way to go.

Hope that helps.


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Personal Statement / Please critique my first draft!?
« on: October 28, 2009, 11:17:48 AM »
Hey, just hoping for any and all feedback on my first draft personal statement. Also, let me know if you would like me to comment on yours, Thanks in Advance.

As soon as we exited the plane, I in my father’s arms and my older siblings close behind, my mother rushed to shower us with kisses as tears of joy clung to her cheeks.  My mother had escaped Poland with my oldest brother a year earlier, while my father stayed behind the Iron Curtain with my siblings until we had a chance to escape. We were finally reunited. Only four years old, I had no idea how incredibly fortunate I was to begin a new life in the US; I wouldn’t have to worry about being forced to work in a Siberian labor camp, as my father had, or feel the terror of seeing foreign soldiers and tanks in the streets, as my mother had.

Our new life wasn’t easy, however. Our family was lucky to have (just) enough food on the table, but not much else. This may have been a blessing because my six siblings and I would never have come to a conclusion on how to divide the spoils; my lone sister would argue that the prettiest family member should get it, my five older brothers would be content with going to fisticuffs over it, while I would argue that since I was the last-born our parents finally got it right with me and, hence, I deserved the prize. Despite the hardships, much good came from my circumstances growing up. My parents didn’t have the time nor the ability to help me succeed in school—they worked constantly and neither of them graduated high school— so I had to rely on myself to get through school, which helped develop my self reliance and a love of learning.   

Unfortunately, not everything I experienced growing up strengthened me. I acquired the idea that only other people—whoever they were—could succeed. My parents carried this attitude as an artifact of the oppression they suffered and I, in turn, adopted it from them. My mother still says, in slightly broken English, “Some people just have the talent.” when referring to those ‘other’ people who are out making a difference in the world. So, after graduating high school I took this attitude into college and performed dismally for three semesters before dropping out. For over two years I worked dead end jobs without any goals or ambitions and without improving myself. My yearning to return to an atmosphere where I could exchange and discuss ideas with others prompted me to return to college, where I met two people who helped me shed my noxious attitude toward success: Dr. XXXX and Dr. XXXX. 

On the first day of his Business Management class XXX paced around the room excitedly discussing the group notebook we would work on the entire semester and the tests we would take as a group and average with our individual test grade. My whole life I had learned to count on myself, and I began to worry about working with, and trusting, others on a project that would affect my grade. Thanks to Dr. XXX inspiration and confidence in me, however, I overcame my initial apprehension and became comfortable working with my team and eventually assumed a leadership role by scheduling meetings and delegating work for our project. Some of my teammates even conferred on me the title of ‘CEO’ of our team. Our hard work paid off when our notebook was posted in the library as a benchmark that future classes could look to as an example of excellence. In Dr. XXX’s class I also had the opportunity to overcome my public speaking anxiety; any student who made an A on a test had to stand in front of the class and discuss how they studied to get their grade and I made sure that I was speaking after every test. With the confidence that I was gaining by these small successes I began to set goals for myself, something I had not done before.

One of my new goals was to publish a paper, so I contacted Dr. XXXX about working on a psychological research project with him. With Dr. XXX’s guidance and support I was able to greatly improve my research and writing skills during this project. Dr. Osborne teamed me up with several other students to work on setting up an experiment, running participants, analyzing the results, and writing up a paper on our findings. With my experience from Dr. XXX’s class I felt comfortable collaborating with the team on these tasks. I outlined how we would collect data from research participants and helped recruit students to participate in the study. After the experiment was run I took input from the group and did a majority of the research and writing of our paper. The intellectual challenge of integrating past research into our paper, incorporating my team members’ ideas, and writing up our results was an extremely difficult but satisfying intellectual challenge. I have continued to be actively involved in the project, editing our paper in an effort to publish it in the Psi Chi Journal of Undergraduate Research.
 
In the past three years I have achieved many of the goals I set for myself: I graduated magna cum laude with a B.S. in Psychology (the first person in my family to earn a degree), I wrote a research paper which may be published soon, and I interned for a semester with the Cato Institute in Washington, D.C., all while working full time to pay for my education. My next goal is to attend the University of Chicago Law School where I can continue to fulfill my potential. The Law School is known for its passion for knowledge in itself, a passion which I share. But, just as importantly, my background makes me aware that ideas have consequences. By attaining a legal education I will be able to satisfy my passion for learning while at the same time gaining the skills necessary to make a tangible impact on the lives of others.

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Personal Statement / Re: please critique opening paragraphs
« on: October 22, 2009, 04:21:25 AM »
Show, don't tell.

instead of "Through the excruciating pain" somethin like "As the stabbing pains shot up my arm, "

instead of "With a sense of panic" somethin like " I felt a pit in my stomach" or "I felt a cold sweat..."

instead of "I was excited" somethin like "My throat relaxed and I could breathe normally again.."

Of course this type of writing will make your PS longer, so don't over do it, but I think it makes it easier for the reader to imagine what is happening and get 'into' the story more. I'm not a writer though, just giving my two cents; take it for what it's worth.

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Where should I go next fall? / Re: 3.786/171
« on: October 21, 2009, 03:51:56 AM »
Don't bother applying at Chicago. I have similar numbers to yours and that is my top choice.  >:(

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Studying for the LSAT / Re: New Comer Help!!
« on: October 21, 2009, 03:32:40 AM »
That's a tough GPA to overcome, but I think a good LSAT score, outstanding personal statement, and an addendum with a good reason for your poor GPA would give you a chance at a "decent" law school. Just a hunch though, I have no experience with admissions boards, yet.

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Studying for the LSAT / Re: Sept. '09 LSAT...TODAY IS THE DAY!!!!
« on: October 17, 2009, 04:54:35 AM »
171 ! Was scoring average of 176 on PrepTests  :-\

Missed 6 on Logic Games; I panicked even though they were so eeeeasssyy. And it could have been worse. I guessed on every question in the last game and got them all right!! I'm a lucky SOB i know. I left the test center completely distraught, thinking I missed them all. LG in December will definitely be harder, so I'm not taking the risk of panicking again.

Congrats to everyone that did well, and to those who didn't, don't give up if Law School is something you really want. Keep up the hard work.

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Studying for the LSAT / What do law schools see when they get your LSAT???
« on: September 27, 2009, 03:04:18 AM »
Hope everyone did well on the LSAT today. I, unfortunately did not; and I have a question the answer to which might make me feel a little better about my law school prospects.

Do law schools see what you scored on each section, or do they just get your overall score?? If anyone knows the answer to this I would really appreciate if you could post it.

I ask because I did excellent on the first four sections; I mean I killed the test. Then my 5th section was the Logic Games, which I am not too good at. I completely bombed this section because I let my nerves get the better of me. I was hoping that if a law school could see that I did great on the other sections I could write an addendum and explain that I just f*$%#d up on this one section, but my true potential is reflected by performance on the other sections. So if anyone knows, please post. Thanks!

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Studying for the LSAT / Re: Where to buy real past lsat tests?
« on: September 25, 2009, 03:57:30 AM »
I got a bunch of individual LSAT Preptests from Half.com. They ranged from $2-$5 and if you buy several from one seller you'll save on shipping.

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