Law School Discussion

Applying to Law School => Personal Statements, Resumes, and Letters of Recommendation => Topic started by: classicalsinger on April 04, 2012, 03:28:09 PM

Title: Please review my personal statement--I could really use your input
Post by: classicalsinger on April 04, 2012, 03:28:09 PM
Hello all,

I could really use some helpful advice and friendly constructive feedback please.  I have written two personal statements.  There is one that I prefer which represents my latest efforts, but I think it could be better.  If I had to grade it, I think I would give it a B. I will gladly critique another personal statement if you provide your private email and your personal statement as an attachment.  Thanks for your time.

Note:   Since I originally posted this, I have noticed quite a few views, but no replies :'(so I have considerably modified this topic and removed my personal statement from the public.  If you are interested in assisting me, that would be greatly appreciated!  Please send me a PM with your statement, and I'll be happy to exchange mine for yours ok? :)  Many thanks!  8)
Title: Re: Please review my personal statement--I could really use your input
Post by: jarvisa240 on May 07, 2012, 06:20:31 PM
Hello!

Send your personal statement to jarvisa240@gmail.com
I will proofread it and reply back.

Send your email address so I can attach the final version.

Title: Re: Please review my personal statement--I could really use your input
Post by: classicalsinger on May 08, 2012, 12:57:57 PM
Will do.  Thanks so much for responding! :)